samedi 19 décembre 2009

MEN AS LOVERS

By Tikum Mbah Azonga

Men are wolves
Yes, that's what they are
They'll do anything to win your love
Once you let them in
Then drop you as if you were sour tart.

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4 commentaires:

  1. Bakia Jemilia arrey29 décembre 2009 à 04:55

    I wish all men get to ed this poem because it is the attitude of most men to pick and drop.which indirectly destroys the life of many young girls

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  2. Tikum Mbah Azonga29 décembre 2009 à 06:38

    Thanks. I have just editd the last line of the poem by replacing the word, `They`, with `Then`.

    TMA

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  3. Atenchong Micheal30 décembre 2009 à 09:18

    Sir why is it that most of the time you edit a few lines of your poems after they have been read and been commented on?

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  4. Tikum Mbah Azonga30 décembre 2009 à 10:57

    Modifications sometimes become necessary as a means of correcting spelling or grammar or some other incongruous in the work.

    TMA

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