By Tikum Mbah Azonga
I can`t say that
So, don`t even think about it
Save your breath for your porridge
And just in case the carpenter our neighbour
Comes asking for round pegs and sour grapes
Tell him all the lines were suppressed last night
By a decree signed by the Head of State.
copyright 2010
your poem are very interesting and what i have discovered is your bilingual pls tell me your secret because i would also like to be bilingual
RépondreSupprimerTHE POEM IS VERY WRONG TIMING intresting; RICH IN FIGURES OF SPEECH AND BY Humorous Motoko MBUSA SHEDALINE JMC 200 LEVEL
RépondreSupprimerThanks. That`s life.
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this poem sustains the reader in a suspense because it has no title, but from the first line, one could get the title of the poem, which is a good literary style.KIVEN BENOIT
RépondreSupprimerThe opening line of this poem will intrigue the reader to read to the end.I wish i could write poems like you do.
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Thanks. Yes, you can if I have a poetry writing workshop with you and any other interested persons.
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